This is a long part, I have more to say on it too, see you Friday with that.
“Then why don't you,” Deborah said, still not entirely convinced by L’lorne's little speech. “If you could rip this planet apart, then why don't you just do it and get Ritch 'arrd so you don't have to deal with us ants.”
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Questions
1. What kind of person is Lcorn L'lorne? What does she look like (in your mind)?
2. What kind of person is the Deborah Ignigus? What does she look like (in your mind)?
3. Does the setting seem fitting? Would you like to know more?
L’lorne had ordered
her a soda, but Deborah couldn't drink it. She just sat and stared
at L’lorne, the image of her practically frolicking through a city
she had destroyed burned in her mind simply wouldn't go away. What
made it worse was the amount of food L’lorne was eating, five or
six plates laid out on the table, with another three stacked up on
the one end, empty of their contents. Deborah's stomach wanted to
growl at the lack of food, but she kept it in check with disgust.
“You should eat
something,” L’lorne said between bites of an open faced sandwich.
“I doubt Ritch 'arrd will have much to offer you.”
Deborah hadn't said
anything since she had arrived, the debate on what to say to L’lorne
when they met again had been eating away at her since she had woken
up. She had nearly given up when she approached the diner, spending
several minutes deciding if she even wanted to see L’lorne again.
Finally, the words found their way out. “How many people did you
kill?”
L’lorne seemed
unphased by the question, and replied between fries. “You'll have
to be more specific. Do you mean humans, aliens, quasi sentient
beings, living machines. . .”
“People since we
met,” Deborah found herself saying with more than a touch of
menace. Such a clarification she felt wasn't necessary, but she knew
L’lorne saw it differently.
“Ah,” L’lorne
said. “About 30 or 40, I don't keep perfect track, but it wouldn't
take much to get an exact figure if you want.”
Deborah's body shook.
About 30 or 40. They died around her and she hadn't even noticed.
L’lorne just kept eating, obviously not bothered by it, and that
made Deborah angry. “What gives you the right?” She said with
increasing anger. “What gives you the right to kill all those
people?”
“Power.”
The flat, candidness
of the response, cause Deborah to snap up a bit, knocking some of the
anger off with surprise. A moment passed as she tried to parse the
simple response. “What?” Was all she could manage to blurt out.
“The power Ritch
'arrd and I, and the others of the Order have gives us the right. We
can do whatever we like, so we do. That's the only reason.”
“That's not a
reason!” Deborah shouted, but the diner residents didn't even
respond this time, they simply didn't acknowledge that she and
L’lorne were there, aside from the brown haired waitress. “You
can't simply say because you can and leave it at that. Power isn't a
reason or excuse or a right. It doesn't let you go off and kill
billions simply because it's fun. No one is powerful enough for
that.”
“Wrong,” L’lorne
said. “I am that powerful.”
“Bullshit,”
Deborah spat back.
L’lorne put her fork
and knife down and straightened up, looking Deborah right in the eye.
“Alright, you want to know how powerful I really am, I'll tell
you. Take every hero and villain you know of, from reality and
fiction. Every warrior and wizard, man and monster, angel and demon,
devil and god. Take all their power, talent and knowledge and pour
it into a single person and give that person the ability to use all
of it. You got that in your mind?” Deborah nodded slightly. “If
I fought that person, I would kick that persons ass without breaking a
sweat.” L’lorne leaned back, rather pleased with herself. “The
truth is my dear, you and everything else in this universe are less
than ants compared to me. In reality, I don't have any reason to
acknowledge you as anything more than that. I could tear this planet
apart as easily as you comb your hair, and more. So killing 30 or 40
people in a few days is nothing to me.”
“Then why don't you,” Deborah said, still not entirely convinced by L’lorne's little speech. “If you could rip this planet apart, then why don't you just do it and get Ritch 'arrd so you don't have to deal with us ants.”
“It doesn't work.”
L’lorne went back to eating. “Ritch 'arrd always manages to get
away in the ensuing chaos. I've been chasing him for nearly a
billion years, trying every way I can think of to catch him.
Honestly, this is the closest I've ever gotten to him.”
Deborah could only
just stifle a snickering laugh. “All that power.”
“He's as powerful as
I am, maybe a touch more powerful.”
There wasn't much to
reply to that, so Deborah didn't. She looked down at the table for a
moment and the checkered pattern that covered the top. It wasn't
made of black and white tiles, but two different tones of white, just
different enough from each other to make the pattern visible but not
quite. Her face soured again as she remembered the first time the
two of the talked, over a chess game. “It's all a damn game to
you, isn't it?” L’lorne said nothing. “That's what this is
all about, some stupid game, and we're all your pawns.”
“The comparison
isn't without merit,” L’lorne said as she cut into a newly
arrived steak.
“And the rule is he
wants you to work to find him,” Deborah said. “That's why you
had to resort to this method, that's why he keeps alluding you. Mama
and I were just unlucky enough to cross your paths.”
“You'll have to ask
Ritch 'arrd about that,” L’lorne said. “Luck is one of the few
things we don't have control of, but we can predict it, perhaps he
did, I don't know.”
Deborah took a deep
sigh. She wasn't getting anywhere, not that she knew where she was
going with this in the first place. She was still angry at L’lorne
for lying, but at the same time she felt sorry for her, sorry she
never had a chance to grow up normal, instead she became some
hyperpowerful monster. One that couldn't use all that power to find
just one person. One person that Deborah had vowed vengeance on over
the death of her mother, one she had never met, one that was as
powerful as L’lorne. “You want me to meet Ritch 'arrd, don't
you?” No response as L’lorne was busy chewing. “Why? What
purpose would it serve? I can't help fight him, I'll just be sitting
on the sidelines watching the two of you go at it. If anything, I
would get in the way, maybe not even that, so why?”
L’lorne put her fork
and knife down on the now empty plate and sat up a bit. “Feelings.
Something about you and your mother triggered emotions that were
locked behind the block. They tell me you must meet Ritch 'arrd,
nothing more.”
Not a good enough
answer, but Deborah didn't say anything. L’lorne was a liar, even
when she told the truth. Deborah slid out of the booth and stood
there. “I don't know if I want to go with you.”
“Is there something
you want me to say to change your mind? I can think of dozens of
reasons, give you a long list of explanations and rationalizations,
but is there something specific?”
Deborah hadn't thought
that far ahead, of course, but she thought on the question as long as
she dared. She could see a lot of the reasons L’lorne would
present, from simply watching Ritch 'arrd or L’lorne die to just
asking Ritch 'arrd those important questions. She could demand
L’lorne give her a straight answer, but decided that wasn't going
to be an option, and perhaps Ritch 'arrd would be more forthcoming
with one, so that left one thing. “Say please.”
L’lorne's head
jerked back slightly, as if she hadn't expected such a request, and
she probably hadn't. All these years being so damn powerful, she
probably never had to ask an ant anything, especially with the word
please in front of it. She nodded after a moment and smiled.
“Alright. Deborah, will you please come with me to see Ritch
'arrd?”
Deborah had a smug
smile developing and made no effort to hide it. “I will, on two
conditions.” She slid back into the seat and held up a finger.
“One, you promise that you won't destroy this planet or anything on
it, or anyone living there when you fight Ritch 'arrd.”
“I promise,”
L’lorne said. Already Deborah could see the loophole developing,
but decided to leave it for now. Forcing the all powerful L’lorne
to agree was enough for the moment.
“Second,” Deborah
looked around the diner. “Let them go.”
L’lorne snickered a
bit. “They're not prisoners,” she said, indicating the small
group that now worked in the diner. The blond was in the kitchen
cooking, the scraggly headed boy was working on paperwork at the
counter, the old man and the fat man sat at one table, talking while
drinking coffee, the old woman was staring out the window and the
brunette was acting as the waitress this time. “They're puppets,
at best. They aren't real.”
“So?”
“So, there would be
no point. They don't know they're trapped here, they won't know no
matter how many times I reactivate them. There's no reason to free
them.”
“Sounds like you're
making excuses to me,” Deborah said. “As if you aren't powerful
enough to do it or something.”
“I didn't say I
couldn't do it, I'm just telling you they won't know the difference,
there's no point.” L’lorne paused as the waitress removed the
empty plates. “And another thing, if I did do it, I would leave
such a large footprint, Ritch 'arrd would see it before I even
finished.”
Deborah smiled,
finally having gotten what she really wanted. “Okay, that's all
fine and good, but let me tell you why you will do it. First, I'm
not going with you unless you do. Second, you want Ritch 'arrd to
know you're coming.”
“So he can escape
again, I don't think so.”
“Ah, but he won't,”
Deborah was starting to get excited. In her mind, she was starting
to see an odd pattern, and whether it was just because it was obvious
or because she had the talent for it, she could be sure, but it was
there. “He wants you to find him, but on his terms. You're doing
it on his terms now, so it's time to tell him you know where he is
and you're coming. What better way than to do something so obvious
he can't help but notice?”
L’lorne pursed her
lips in thought. “You have a point. Alright, I'll do it.” She
closed her eyes and Deborah took in a deep breath. Before she could
exhale, L’lorne reopened her eyes. “Done.”
Deborah stuttered her
breath into a cough. “Already?”
“Yes, all finished.”
“How can I trust
you?”
“Like this,”
L’lorne pointed over her shoulder to the door, which opened, and a
man that Deborah had never seen before entered.
“Evening Hal,” the
waitress said. “Usual?”
“Yes Sabrina,” Hal
said, sitting down on one of the stools at the bar.
“He's a regular, has
been for five years,” L’lorne explained. “The waitress is
Sabrina Bogen, she's been working her for six months and has a small
apartment on the west end of town. She's going to school for
criminal justice.”
“Brian,” the blond
in the kitchen called out. “We're nearly out of buns, better order
some more.”
“I got it,” Brian,
the scraggly headed boy said.
“That's Brian and
Tina Roars. They've been married two years now, high school
sweethearts. They bought this place last year and have been running
it ever since. He cooks the breakfasts and she does the dinners,
quite well in fact,” L’lorne gestured to her plates. “They
work together on the lunch rush. At the end of the day, the go home
to a small apartment a couple streets down and sleep all night. They
haven't decided to have any children yet, mostly because they can't
seem to find the time.”
“Mrs. Devenro?”
Sabrina said to the old woman. “Did you need a refill?”
“Huh? Oh, no dear,
I'm fine.”
“Julia Devenro is a
widow. She spends her evenings here because she has nothing better
to do with her time. Her only son died in a car accident a couple
years ago, so she truly all alone in the world, and this is her only
refuge.”
“Miss!” the fat
man yelled. “I'd like a refill please.”
“Coming.”
“That's Officer
Terry Dentmore. He's the desk sergeant for the local police station.
His superiors are coming down on him because of his weight, but he's
resistant, just like his father.” The old man held up his cup as
Sabrina refilled it. “They had a falling out many years ago and
only a few months ago did they start speaking again. They meet here
once a week to drink coffee and talk about their days.”
“You did all that?”
Deborah said a bit stunned at the amount of information L’lorne
had just laid on her.
“More than that,
actually,” L’lorne said. “That was only a rough background, I
also had to build up their memories, give them friends and family,
places to live, identification numbers, phone numbers and bank
accounts. Apartments had to be found and furnished, debts incurred,
educational and medical histories detailed and recorded, both
electronic and hard copies. Finding a son for Julia to have that
died was probably the hardest part of the whole thing, honestly.”
“Wow,” Deborah
once again found herself in awe of L’lorne's power. She kept the
image of the burning city in her mind even as she stared in wonder at
L’lorne. Still, she had gotten her to do something that wasn't
vicious and evil, so maybe, just maybe, there was still hope for her.
“Well, it is
impressive, but not overly so,” L’lorne said. “So, are you
coming now?”
“Yes, I will.”
“Good,” L’lorne
said. “I suggest you order something to eat, like I said, Ritch
'arrd isn't exactly known for his cooking. Tina, however, is very
good. I recommend the steak.”
Deborah's stomach
growled at the thought.
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Questions
1. What kind of person is Lcorn L'lorne? What does she look like (in your mind)?
2. What kind of person is the Deborah Ignigus? What does she look like (in your mind)?
3. Does the setting seem fitting? Would you like to know more?
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