Finishing yesterday's section, and one more.
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Questions
1. What kind of person is Lcorn L'lorne? What does she look like (in your mind)?
2. What kind of person is the Deborah Ignigus? What does she look like (in your mind)?
3. What kind of person is The Ritch 'arrd? What does his human form look like (in your mind)?
4. Does the setting seem fitting? Would you like to know more?
5. Does it all seem justified now?
“You still haven't
told me why,” Deborah said, her eyes starting to fill with tears as
he spoke, so she brushed them away with her hand.
“No, I haven't,”
he said, moving back to his seat and sitting forward. “It was
because of you.”
“What?”
“I saw you several
weeks ago, working the street, watching for cop cars and such. I
noticed it almost immediately, probably as quickly as Lakinde did.
Your talent, your ability to see patterns in chaos. That would make
all my ambitions not only that much greater, but easier too.”
Ritch 'arrd took a deep breath. “I couldn't take you though. No
matter how much I wanted to add that ability to the greater human
race, I couldn't do something that was bound to fail to you. The
scientists under my command are some of the best this world has to
offer, but even they weren't ready to deal with you. So I went after
the next available blood relative.”
“Mama.”
“Correct. The plan
was to take her, let them play their genetic games, then use her
genetic makeup as blueprint for the future. A failure that would
lead to greater successes, as it were. She would be gone, and you
would eventually fall into the child care system, where I would use
my influence to get you sent to a wonderful foster family and give
you a powerful education, and perhaps even bring you to me one day.”
He looked up at L’lorne for a moment. “I underestimated you,
and I failed to account for Lakinde.” He turned back to Deborah, a
shade of shame on his face. “Amongst my people, where we hold the
teacher as most important, the most important teacher is the first,
the parent, and I took yours away from you for my own reasons and
ambitions. Will you forgive me for it?”
Deborah said nothing.
She looked at him, still looking for whether he spoke the truth or
not, but could find nothing that said he wasn't. Even through his
odd, far too normal face and body, she could see something sincere,
he really meant what he said. “Well, yeah, okay. I accept your
apology.”
“Thank you,” Ritch
'arrd said. “I know you still hurt, and it will fade over time,
and you may even stay angry at me for a while, but thank you for
however much it is worth to you.” He smiled and leaned back,
looking at L’lorne. “So how much do you know about us Deborah?
Our past and relationship.”
“Enough,” Deborah
said, still tearing up slightly as she spoke. “Delphi told me.”
“Did it? I didn't
think Lakinde would have let it. Interesting.” He trailed off.
L’lorne, for her
part, stayed quiet during the remainder of the exchange, but by now
had put her cup down on the table and was staring at Ritch 'arrd
rather intensely. “Why wouldn't I?” she finally said.
“I would like to
know though,” Ritch 'arrd finally started again, ignoring L’lorne's
comment. “Why didn't you save Patricia's life?”
Deborah shifted back,
then snapped her head around to L’lorne, who hadn't moved in any
form of a reply. “L’lorne?”
“The genetic
alterations weren't that great, you could have undone them, why
didn't you?”
“L’lorne,”
Deborah said with more force. She could have saved her, but didn't?
Because of what? Why? She wanted to ask, but L’lorne didn't seem
to respond to either Ritch 'arrd or her.
Then L’lorne began
to shake.
“Oh dear,” Ritch
'arrd said. Before Deborah could ask what he meant, she found
herself in Ritch 'arrd's arms, and then on the other side of the pool
from the small seating area.
“What the. . .”
“You need to hide,
now,” Ritch 'arrd said in a serious tone that was completely unlike
anything he had used up until this moment.
“Why?”
Ritch 'arrd turned
back to where L’lorne was and Deborah followed his gaze. The
chairs were on fire now, pieces of tile were breaking off and
floating upwards around L’lorne, who was still seated on the
quickly disintegrating seat. He turned back to Deborah and drew her
eyes to his. “She's removed the block.”
L’lorne screamed.
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She screamed again,
then began puffing and breathing in short bursts. Hermes buzzed
around her and silently offered her a shot of pain reliever, which
she refused. It was important to her to feel every inch of this, no
matter how much it hurt. If L’lorne hadn't wanted to go through
the pain, she had ways not to, but not this time. There would be no
easy way out.
“Give me one more
push,” Mercury said from underneath her. L’lorne responded with
a jarring scream. Hermes dropped down to join his brother and the
two watermelon sized drones babbled at each other quickly.
Suddenly all the pain
stopped. L’lorne was about to lash out, but Hermes floated up
holding a bundle in his antigravity fields. “It's a boy,” he
said.
L’lorne wrapped her
arms around the child and pulled away the cloth wrappings. His face
was bubbly and fast, skin wrinkly and hair matted and wet. He was
crying, a sound that made L’lorne smile. “He's beautiful.”
Ritch 'arrd came in, a
proud smile on his face. “All done I see,” he leaned over and
looked at the child. “Have you thought of a name yet?”
“Mcorn Nesatil, he
who is a child of the stars.”
Ritch 'arrd nodded
only and held out his hands. “May I?”
L’lorne nodded, and
wearily handed the boy over. “Nesatil, this is your father,” she
said. “Say hi.” The boy cried, causing both to chuckle.
“Come with me little
one,” Ritch 'arrd said as he carried him out of the room.
L’lorne leaned back
and started reactivating her internal regulators. Hermes offered a
chemical energy booster, which L’lorne did not refuse, allowing it
to flow into her system. “He's my first,” she said. “Oh
mother, if only you could see him.”
“I'm sure she would
be proud,” Mercury said as he began cleaning her up.
“Yeah, she would
be,” L’lorne said. It had been so long since she had thought of
her mother that it seemed like another life. It practically was,
another universe, billions of years ago now. She tried hard to
remember her face, and finally had to resort to a genetic
reconstruction in her mind just to get a sense of it. The image, as
much as she wanted it to, didn't give her the feelings she wanted.
It was just another face, the memories associated with it faded
almost to the point of nonexistence. She'd have to rebuild them. . .
Something was wrong.
Her sensors still weren't a full capacity, but she could already feel
it. Though her limbs were still weak, she managed to roll herself
off the bed and activate a rough anti-gravity field to hold her up.
Hermes started to protest, but backed off when she flew forward,
through the nearest wall and down to Delphi's lower observation deck.
Ritch 'arrd stood
there, watching as she came in, the bundle in his arms. Nothing
looked particularly amiss, except that something was missing.
L’lorne's sensors were now activating in quick succession and she
started to go grey at what she was getting. “No,” she managed to
mutter.
“He simply wasn't
strong enough,” Ritch 'arrd said without even a hint of compassion
or apology. “The next one will be better, I'm sure.”
“No,” she
repeated, more emphatically, and hurried toward him, her sensors
transmitting what was now more and more obvious by the second.
Nesatil wasn't crying.
L’lorne screamed.
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Questions
1. What kind of person is Lcorn L'lorne? What does she look like (in your mind)?
2. What kind of person is the Deborah Ignigus? What does she look like (in your mind)?
3. What kind of person is The Ritch 'arrd? What does his human form look like (in your mind)?
4. Does the setting seem fitting? Would you like to know more?
5. Does it all seem justified now?
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